While proofing the script, I had made some mental images. Your pics pretty much confirmed them. I think you digitally told a personal story and your did it well. You showed enthusiasm for your dogs and a special event that you and your family (including the dogs) attended. I'd say mission accomplished. The only critique i could say was mild sound level issues, but i don't see that in the grading rubric so your in the clear there. I was a fun presentation to watch and listen to.
The issue with the audio is from PhotoStory. If I clicked the next slide button while I was talking, it would drop out the audio for a second. I need to work on making sure I'm not talking when the images are changing.
While proofing the script, I had made some mental images. Your pics pretty much confirmed them. I think you digitally told a personal story and your did it well. You showed enthusiasm for your dogs and a special event that you and your family (including the dogs) attended. I'd say mission accomplished. The only critique i could say was mild sound level issues, but i don't see that in the grading rubric so your in the clear there. I was a fun presentation to watch and listen to.
ReplyDeleteThe issue with the audio is from PhotoStory. If I clicked the next slide button while I was talking, it would drop out the audio for a second. I need to work on making sure I'm not talking when the images are changing.
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